Help.

[davidjones]

this mix is up for scrutiny. It's potentially a demo for a wagga night spot. How serious do I need to be about my mixing for an initial demo? Is this demo more about track selection? I need feedback. I feel that it is too messy, but when i listened to it half cut through my HD25's I thought it was the bomb what do you think? Back to the drawing board? Let me know, please....., maybe I'm lazy and should work harder on it but i like to sound a little raw or rough around the edges sometimes......im almost prepared to pay for advice thats good lol

http://soundcloud.com/davidjones33/demo-1

[Cupe]

Any chance you can write up the transition times?

[russell]

I feel that it is too messy

I've not listened but the fact you've even said this should tell you that you need to do it again. You want your demo to be as professional as you can possibly make it.

I know I wouldn't give someone a gig if they were couldn't be bothered to make their demo sound good. What would they be like on the night is what I'd be thinking...

[davidjones]

Good advice

[Mitch]

As russell essentially said, how do you expect the club to be happy with it if your not happy with your own efforts?

Make it as good as you can so you show your listener the full potential you have

[davidjones]

OK here it is, I'm happy with this plaease listen.

http://soundcloud.com/davidjones33/demo-1-vers-2-tighter

[davidjones]

I''l put up the transition times too

[legunner]

Sounds much tighter this time nice dude