Dubstep preview - constructive critisism?

[JonnyB]

i got ableton last week and this is my first attempt at a track in it.

still along way to go but.

what do you guys think?

http://rapidshare.com/files/264308337/a ... 2.mp3.html

[CBG]

hey brother, that link is broken/ It has reached it's d/l limit.

http://www.ausdjforums.com/modules.php? ... opic&t=181

Bump this when u fix it and ill have a listen.

[Tomy]

fail on the link. repost i wanna listen.

[CBG]

someone doesn't check their threads very often lol.

[JonnyB]

sorry guys this is the first time ive been home since friday night:). ill have a link up tomorow arvo, my mac is at a mates which has the track on it..

sorry again guys.

[JonnyB]

hey guys here is the new link

sorry for the wait, but dont expect much, i was just playing around in ableton learning new things

ableton dubstep 2nd preview 2.mp3 - 8.05MB

[Tomy]

Evolves well, not sure if i spelt that right..... stays interesting.

[ChevChelios]

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