JonnyB Posted October 21, 2010 Share Posted October 21, 2010 remix we are doign for BomBeatz Records from america, finally have our first remix for a label, hopefully it will lead to more and hopefully some originals.EDIT(THE TRACK IS NOW UPDATED, THIS POST HAS BEEN EDITED WITH THE NEWER VERSION Woobbes - Norwaytrip(KUN unmasterd full version) by knocked Up Noise Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CBG Posted October 21, 2010 Share Posted October 21, 2010 Pro's:- nice kick- vocal sit nice- synth sits nicelyCons: - Sub bass didnt hit very hard- the perc is a bit boring- i would have like to have heard more of the vocal and maybe a bit more stereo sound, like some random panning hats or something.Pretty nice track man, kick and synth are gd Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JonnyB Posted October 21, 2010 Author Share Posted October 21, 2010 yeah tbh i havnt done fuck all with the drums and percs yet, was basically 3 loops the whle way through, ive already changed that though.there hasnt been a sub bass added to it yet im going to have a break down with more vocals in it as well.cheers for the feed of back Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CBG Posted October 21, 2010 Share Posted October 21, 2010 im working on bettering that feedback Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lloydc Posted October 21, 2010 Share Posted October 21, 2010 So far so good, I understand that it's not finished, but i agree with what CBG has said.In addition:you lose me between 1min-1:30.... once it hits the 1m mark it feels like the end of the song. It feels like it doesn't go anywhere. I like the rest, but i would like to hear the pitch of the vocal change at least once between 1;45-2m.finish this fucker and post back Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pulsebeat Posted October 22, 2010 Share Posted October 22, 2010 jonny why love the wobblesnot good on the production but i agree with cbg on his feedbacki like the song tho dudeoh and congrats on getting the labeli expect big things from you matefinnish it off!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChevChelios Posted October 23, 2010 Share Posted October 23, 2010 Pros:-Nice dynamics in the intro-Good variation in that first synthCons:-To me it sounds heaps flat, the synths are lacking, but a bit of processing should hopefully fix that.-and yeah it gets a bit monotonous.-Mixdown needs a lot of workPretty rough, but has potential. If I was you Id want to make this pretty bangin if its gonna be your first release, you dont want to start out on a bad note Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eggssell Posted October 24, 2010 Share Posted October 24, 2010 first up congrats bro for getting tapped to remix.nice intro (use of vaocal sample again adds the flavour. like cbg said use it more). and i like the first drop into the wobble.and the sharp horn-y(?) sound in the last phrase works well.im liking the sound of it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JonnyB Posted October 25, 2010 Author Share Posted October 25, 2010 thanks guys, will take all your ideas to teh studio and see how i go. <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JonnyB Posted October 25, 2010 Author Share Posted October 25, 2010 FINISHED - well not quite, unmstaered, and im yet to take it to my mates hosue to check for all the sub bass freq's, i cant hear that shit on my speakers so yeah, pretty much how its going to end up maybe a few changes hear and there (want to make the build into the drop more effective)the first post has been edited with the pdated version as well Woobbes - Norwaytrip(KUN unmasterd full version) by knocked Up Noise Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pulsebeat Posted October 25, 2010 Share Posted October 25, 2010 i cant tell on my laptop but when i use my headfones the sub bass freq sounds better then the first one but idk doesnt sound like 100% idk maybe its my headfones ill have another listen tomorro and tell yajonny whens my DL coming throughgood work man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buck_Choi Posted October 25, 2010 Share Posted October 25, 2010 k i commented on soundcloud. im no good at really leaving feedback..but i done what i could.. haha hope it helps.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eggssell Posted October 25, 2010 Share Posted October 25, 2010 bloody good!as above youve got awesome wobble in there. like all the new vocal drops.that melody that begins at 2.30ish is still the best (cant remember now if that was the horn-y sounds i meant in review either way that shits logged in my head now).nice amount of change ups.and that build into the last bigg phrase really revs it up.hope they like it. and hook us up man! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JonnyB Posted October 25, 2010 Author Share Posted October 25, 2010 pulse, wont be up for download as its a remix for a label Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BeatLeSS Posted October 25, 2010 Share Posted October 25, 2010 Second buildup to drop feels like need a bit more warning to such a change. Loved the progression of second drop through to end, came out nicely. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JonnyB Posted November 4, 2010 Author Share Posted November 4, 2010 mastered it finally, going to take in some last feedback and make ome appropiate changes if need be, then send it off to zee label Norway Trip(knockedupnoise) - Woobbes by knocked Up Noise Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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