LabRat Posted March 25, 2010 Share Posted March 25, 2010 ok here it is!!! my second attempt at drum and bass and i feel this one is better then my first by far!enjoy! this is Obscenity Obscenity - Spitfire & Horizon by Spitfire Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CBG Posted March 25, 2010 Share Posted March 25, 2010 commented man. gd stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LabRat Posted March 25, 2010 Author Share Posted March 25, 2010 cheers for the info man. appreciate it yeh its still a demo at the moment. really wanna get this one mastered so guna take it to a mate tomorrow and see what he can do for me. as for the intro in the beginning, its very "i dont care as long as it's dj friendly". pritty weak effort on my behalf to be honest but i think the main focus was trying to get the structure right (being my second dnb tune). but i will take all comments and work towards making things better in future productions. every bit helps Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChevChelios Posted March 25, 2010 Share Posted March 25, 2010 Pros:-Like the beat, those little reverse edits are sick-Yes love the sample, brit flicks FTW-Bassline is cool, I really like the kind of DnB wobble thing that comes in -Melody is sick-Break is pretty effective, you need to work on when it comes back in, doesn't go right (cant explain it better haha)Cons:-Intro drags a bit, needs something intersting going on-Gets a bit monotonous on the second drop, need to change it up a bit, introduce something new, just something, I dunno-Just overall work needs to be done, sounds unfinished, you know.Not my kind of DnB, I like it either hard banging or liquid haha, but it was enjoyable. I liked the prog feel on the bassline, still needs work before you get it mastered though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LabRat Posted March 26, 2010 Author Share Posted March 26, 2010 cheers Chev. i dont like to over-do things and really fuck them up bout i'll take it with me and see what i can do my mate knows more about drum n bass then me so ill see if he can make some magic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CBG Posted March 26, 2010 Share Posted March 26, 2010 remember what I said, dont do too much. Just small changes, your mate will know what that means. Panning, widening, layering, EQing etc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LabRat Posted March 26, 2010 Author Share Posted March 26, 2010 easy. cheers for the feedback guys Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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