20 min House mix - looking for feedback

[Otto]

https://soundcloud.com/ottomcgee/20-min-of-house

I'm looking for tips and advice on my first recorded mix. Pretty accurate representation of how I normally mix, with a few mistakes here and there... Been bedroom DJing for ~1 month.

[Gandy]

Hi Otto,

I have moved your thread to our mixes section, had a wild guess it was a house mix going by the name

Please feel free to introduce yourself in the intro section you will find you will probably get some better feedback on your mix once we know a little about you

also no need to post it all over the boards, just keep to the genre section please

[Kodiak]

Just had a listen, while I was doing some other things. I liked it. To me no obvious technical issues stand out at all. Although at about 9:00 (mixing into the gadget theme song) I was wondering what was happening as it seemed to go quiet. That was the only part where I was listening and it got my attention and went back to listen again. Pretty good mix of funkier house and electro. Oh... And loved that build where I stuck a comment in.

[Otto]

Thank you - been in Queensland for the past week and a bit so haven't checked the replies or comments. Just before I left I re-recorded the mix, just because there were a few bits I knew I could have done a lot better.

Apart from the trainwreck at 1:35, I think this one is a lot smoother? Let me know what you think please!

https://soundcloud.com/ottomcgee/mix-1