Critique my first track please

[scraggy]

Hey guys, any feedback on my first track would be welcome, especially the mixing and mastering:

http://soundcloud.com/djscraggy/shobblestone

Loving the glitch hop, here's a mix I made as well:

http://soundcloud.com/djscraggy/scraggy ... wubbawubba

Cheers

T

[SolDios]

http://soundcloud.com/djscraggy/shobblestone

That's a really solid tune man, Nothing to really critique on my end, I think it sounds great the way it is!

[Mitch]

moved to electro & breaks - tracks.

for future reference, tracks go in the tracks sub-forum of the relevant genre, mixes go in the mixes sub-forum. So you can make a separate thread for your mix in electro & breaks - mixes

also it is better if you embed as soldios did for your track above. to do this, you go like this

[SoundCloud]http://soundcloud.com/djscraggy/shobblestone[/SoundCloud]

as far as the tune goes, it's pretty cool track man, real funky element to it

[anarchy]

Very funky tune... Quite a good quality production you got here. Nice one

[GREMM1S]

Yeah sounds great man well done, only thing cut back on those echo/darth vader sounds annoyed me when i listened to the track closely.

[Tomy]

the vocal and the wobble bass clash a fair bit. give the bass a decent cut around 2k to give the vocals some space perhaps? maybe knock it down a db or 2.

really really cool though man, funky as hell. i think it would stand up alright with out the vocals.

**edit. but if you take out the vocals you wont need to cut the bass.