here are my thoughts: 1. too much deadmau5 2. the first two songs went for too long (not including mr g)... It's a good idea to make your first two songs relatively short, you'll keep peoples attention that way. This isn't a golden rule, but something to think about. 3. your transitions were too long... seems you were mixing outro>intro? try mixing in a bit earlier, and if you don't know about phrasing, have a read around the net. It will help you a lot in this regard 4.mix into city in florida seemed a little out of sync? 5. the mix didn't seem to have much flow... I would have put animal rights in earlier as well (thats just me though) other than that, I liked what I heard. if you have any questions about any of the stuff awesome88 or myself has mentioned, post a reply or what ever and we'll be happy to help you out.