that drop is about 100000000 times better than the one in the last track you posted, fucking mental! only way I reckon you can make it better is a bit more dynamic variation, as the volume seemed too constant throughout. like, bring the volume of the builds down a lot more so when it drops it will hit way harder, and maybe lengthen that section between the last snare hit and the drop itself from maybe 2 beats to 2 bars or something where it just fades for a bit and THEN it drops. Also, extending the build as a whole might work as that just vocal part is really cool. A bit more of a build during the last 2 bars I reckon would sound badass so you can then have a massive release at the end of it, as the transistion between the 2 sections now it pretty blunt if that makes sense. sick work though. keep it up.